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I Came In from the Place, No One Greeted Me
When I entered the hall, I waited for about 15 minutes. Yes, there was an intensity, but still, at least someone should have said “Welcome”. Fortunately, Mrs. Gunay noticed me, so I thank her from here.
The Products Did Not Meet My Expectations
The grapes I ordered came in a ratio of 5/3 from the minced meat pie, and 5/2 from the plain minced meat pie. It really wasn't worth waiting all that long. Frankly, this place is overrated.
The Pastry Experience Also Did Not Satisfy
I asked for plain pastry, but they said there was no left, only chocolate and cheddar. I said ”no problem" and accepted both of them, but six of the muffins that came in had dried up. When I communicated the situation, the pastries were returned.
In conclusion: I am not satisfied in general, I do not intend to prefer it again.
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İhsan G.
Level 5 Local Expert
October 17, 2024
One of the stars of breakfast at the historical Bilici Pastry Shop is honey cream and fried eggs. Honey cream is the exact consistency, melts in the mouth; it goes great with crispy bread on the side. The roasted egg is another one with its taste, the roasting is carefully cooked and perfectly compatible with the egg. Also, the mince pies with currants are really delicious too; the balance of sweet and salty is perfect. However, the water pastry did not appeal much to my taste buds, it was a little softer and greasier. Overall, it was a nice experience, but everything was very enjoyable except for the water pies.
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Ahmet Karabulut
Level 2 Local Expert
December 15, 2024
we've been going whenever we get the chance for over 10 years, the only problem is that it's too busy, and parking is a problem, but it's worth the trouble for its unique taste 🙏